Thursday, December 11, 2008

Way back home

Because of a number of mistakes, the story has been temporarily erased from the website.

6 comments:

L.L.P said...

So delicious and moist.

Btw. That true, you are so surprisingly shrewd creature .

basia said...

A cunning creature indeed;D but mostly I'd like to say that there is something in the way you write that makes the posts like short stories, and a good ones :-)
So you'd better go on writing because I like to read;D

hannah.bundle said...

Kris, I'm speechless:)
I admire ur passion for detailed descriptions.

My word of advice - try to be more understanding towards people, none is perfect;)...only transparency;D

Take care:-)

Monika said...

A good story, Kris. I'm a fan of your style, but still - can't you be more optimistic and friendly?
Look forward to reading more :)

atram said...

Thank you Kris for inviting me to read your blog. Man, you're so gifted! I liked the account of your journey home enormously - I always sort of suspected you of such a poetic inclination;).
I don't know how much of this is fact and how much is fiction(alized), but I was a bit disappointed by you not developing the thread with the elderly woman on the train - it sounded like a promising beginning of a story. Then, of course, there is your deft strategy of arranging your account as a series of beginnings of potential but never realized relationships - the metaphor of a traveler perfectly fits this scheme. I loved your piece, will wait for more. Thumbs up!

k.t said...

I think that I've got some good ideas but it is quite difficult to realise them... once I tried to carry on with the thread of the man that I met when eating the hamburger but it was not satisfactory and I had to abandon it.

Now, I ve got the plan to divide chapters according to the number of beers. And the perception of world will surely change.

This the story is fictional, however the protagonist bears a lot of my features :-). But I don't drink this much. :D