A cunning creature indeed;D but mostly I'd like to say that there is something in the way you write that makes the posts like short stories, and a good ones :-) So you'd better go on writing because I like to read;D
Thank you Kris for inviting me to read your blog. Man, you're so gifted! I liked the account of your journey home enormously - I always sort of suspected you of such a poetic inclination;). I don't know how much of this is fact and how much is fiction(alized), but I was a bit disappointed by you not developing the thread with the elderly woman on the train - it sounded like a promising beginning of a story. Then, of course, there is your deft strategy of arranging your account as a series of beginnings of potential but never realized relationships - the metaphor of a traveler perfectly fits this scheme. I loved your piece, will wait for more. Thumbs up!
I think that I've got some good ideas but it is quite difficult to realise them... once I tried to carry on with the thread of the man that I met when eating the hamburger but it was not satisfactory and I had to abandon it.
Now, I ve got the plan to divide chapters according to the number of beers. And the perception of world will surely change.
This the story is fictional, however the protagonist bears a lot of my features :-). But I don't drink this much. :D
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So delicious and moist.
Btw. That true, you are so surprisingly shrewd creature .
A cunning creature indeed;D but mostly I'd like to say that there is something in the way you write that makes the posts like short stories, and a good ones :-)
So you'd better go on writing because I like to read;D
Kris, I'm speechless:)
I admire ur passion for detailed descriptions.
My word of advice - try to be more understanding towards people, none is perfect;)...only transparency;D
Take care:-)
A good story, Kris. I'm a fan of your style, but still - can't you be more optimistic and friendly?
Look forward to reading more :)
Thank you Kris for inviting me to read your blog. Man, you're so gifted! I liked the account of your journey home enormously - I always sort of suspected you of such a poetic inclination;).
I don't know how much of this is fact and how much is fiction(alized), but I was a bit disappointed by you not developing the thread with the elderly woman on the train - it sounded like a promising beginning of a story. Then, of course, there is your deft strategy of arranging your account as a series of beginnings of potential but never realized relationships - the metaphor of a traveler perfectly fits this scheme. I loved your piece, will wait for more. Thumbs up!
I think that I've got some good ideas but it is quite difficult to realise them... once I tried to carry on with the thread of the man that I met when eating the hamburger but it was not satisfactory and I had to abandon it.
Now, I ve got the plan to divide chapters according to the number of beers. And the perception of world will surely change.
This the story is fictional, however the protagonist bears a lot of my features :-). But I don't drink this much. :D
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